Yay for use of the word "chappie" hehehe.

:)

This chapter is so incredibly real sounding. Like I could picture it happening. Sucks that Maddie is so nervous about being with Noah completely, hopefully she can get her nerves under control and just let herself fall for him. Loved it :)

It was pretty good, I just wish she didn't cry to make it all awkward n stuff. Pretty good though!

haha yea i told you, i gave you a fair warining! :D

lol, this was a awesome chapter!

I expected nothing the less from your writing!

YEAY!

this is great. the pacing of this story is very nice.

keep writing! D

hopefully that doesn't get noah in trouble in future chapters

lolz thank you! and this wasa really good chappy because she hears from someone else's POV that noah really cares about her. and so soon enough, she'll be able to see it. ]

glad she put on a brave face...yay for her

poor noah though getting the cold

i love this story UPDATE! lol

aww cool i get to be a small character lol i can see Rebecca's twin, also named rebecca come into the show lol. but yea a little happy becca lol

I liked this chapter, some times when people write things its like just no. but this one was good, oh and i thik i ofun a typo:Actually I was just trying to gather up the stamina to go make some soup.” LOGAN lifted his head up weakly. were logan come from i thought his name was noah? lol

sweet little chapter. Nice that Maddie took care of him while he was sick. Like the progression of the story, and as always look forward to updates :)

banging story! lolz, how do you just keep coming up with brilliant ideas?

lolz snazzy and pimp are very good adjectivess!