Reviews for Anise
Guest chapter 3 . 7/5/2015
I'm afraid the mistakes are simply too much for me to handle. Apologies.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2015
This certainly needs some editing. You got you're and your mixed up, and you need commas in certain spots. Little things like that. I like the premise, it's interesting. So I'll give it a go, and hopefully there aren't any more mistakes that bug me terribly.
PenMasterEm chapter 32 . 4/12/2015
Hi there! I read both Anise and Scarlet Rose and I have to say that I loved both of them. If you're still looking for a Beta then I'd be happy to do it for you. I have some ideas that could make this story flow a little smoother. I noticed in the beginning chapters that the story were a little choppy and sporadic. Not overly so, but there is still some things that could be added to fill it in. Message me if you're interested and keep up with the great work! I look forward to reading some more of your stories.
R. Ficst chapter 29 . 9/24/2014
I wish we got to experience Drustan's acclimation to present times more thoroughly, instead of just a summary. I had been looking forward to it.
The Phoenix Girl chapter 32 . 12/21/2013
Such an amazing story! The summary didn't give it its right... Loved reading it :)
Guest chapter 6 . 3/19/2013
I don't blame her. I'd be seriously pissed, too. Needs some editing, by the way.
Not Impressed chapter 22 . 1/1/2013
meow chapter 32 . 11/10/2012
needed to hook Murrray up with Cameron's friend Diana!1
September Stone chapter 31 . 10/28/2012
I really enjoyed this story, read it all in one sitting. :D
nomoreupdates chapter 31 . 9/24/2012
Omg this story was fantastic. There WERE a lot of typos that could be fixed but the fact that the characters were so amazing and the plot was so good makes up for it. I actually FELL IN LOVE with Drustan!

I would love for a Diana/Murray sequel. I definitely felt some vibes from them.

All in all, well done. Definitely a fave for me :)
boredstarburt chapter 30 . 8/31/2012
Sweet story. ]
AnonymousMoiselle chapter 1 . 8/20/2012
Rachlynn chapter 31 . 6/10/2012
Hello! I just finished your story. I loved it! I would absolutely love to see a story for Murray. You are a great writer and I am off to read more of your stories.
AboutAs SubtleAs A FlyingBrick chapter 4 . 5/17/2012
Noticed that you were using Gaelic. Probably Scottish Gaelic, I think it's really cool. I'm from Ireland. And yeah it's awesome.
AtianaGray chapter 30 . 5/8/2012
Thanks so much for the story, I just read it in total yesterday night and I love it :D Will read it again ;)
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