Such a good chapter i notice a couple spelling mistakes but over all great. I loved the last paragraph in this chapter it was so sweet and cute! CWTRM

Poor Camaron :(

She doesn't seem to mad with him anymore, i know i would have been still but i cant wait to find out what the witch says

I went from happy to mad. Damn old school men. Good chapter not much wrong. CWTRM

I like that she is trying to fit in, and i bet Drustan must really hate being ordered around by her, hahaha, i get a kick out of thinking about how men back then would balk at a women for doing that.

Awww! *does a little happy dance* that was so sweet and cute!

Camaron is so funny, a bundle of emotions. But god i feel for her, it would really blow to have all these feelings for a guy you don't even know. GC, i really like this story. Drustan is funny to, I loved how he caught he staring in the last chapter.

Wow so much just happened, I'm so I'm a little confused. There weren't that many spelling errors but i don't think they used the word akward in that time. Interesting chapter can't wait to read the next

Hahaha no one could resist that type of sexy-ness even if they tried, i was wonder how they got in that position if she was in that old school dress.

I really liked this chapter it was really great. Not to many errors and great deployment.

Her is so sweet, i love the roughness he has, and i hope people don't think she is a witch of anything. Plus i think i would do what cam did in that situation good chapter cant wait for more

I really would loved to know more about her. Right now she seen so emotional. And you misspelled he saw with his last breath. But other than that great chapter i can't wait to find out what is going to happen to her

Good first chapter i felt i could relate to the guy More then the girl. her part felt a little rushed and confusing bit of was still good

Great last chapter! Can't wait to hear more about Murray though! Maybe we'll see some more of Cameron and her Laird? ;)

hi,

jaaaaaaaahhhhhh, finished. it's nearly good enough to forget what a clifhangerdevil you are but i think i forgive you because you updated so fast _. am i gracious or what? *angelicsmile*

to make it short i love your story. and i think there is no need for an epilog. but if you love this characters so much you could write another story that use some things from your original one. e.g.: the lovestory between murray and diana (or someone else) or even better a story between the time drustan and cameron comes. there are so many possiblilities like the story after drustan travel through the time (in his original timeline and/or his new one) or some story of the mystical written instructions of one of the maclean descendant of durstans uncle.

okay thats all

bye bye koyama