Reviews for battalion
Shiro.Kokoro chapter 1 . 11/22/2009
I like the alligator part. And the cubes of light. :)
lenavis chapter 1 . 11/18/2009
...and when things start meeting in your basement like that, you know it's time to buy a good ol' can of Raid.

Honestly though, your descriptions are so hyper-detailed that it's almost metaphorical. All the literary techniques that you use fit together really nicely - I like this a lot.