|Reviews for Smiles & Leaves|
| lenavis chapter 1 . 11/19/2009
did you write the small blurb at the top there? because it's fairly cute. I like it.
although the prologue to your story is kind of generic, and although you've got some typos here and there, the overall flow of your piece is good.
also, the dialog's realistic, which is a definite plus. Keep writing! :)