This story is really good! you have real talent. it's entertaining and very well written.

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its not bad a little curious though.

hmm very interesting you have a few error you should look over.

Time to be sold

hope she doesnt end with kon

Interesting

curious about her fate

hehe nice

A 6hrs straight of reading...it was worth it luv the whole story and the twist at the end. i have to admit that kon koshi is my favorite character. i wouldnt mind him and aya getting together, but i guess jumihon has dibbs on that. well, all i can say is that this is one serious love story, and im glad youre writting it. maybe it can be published?

p.s.) youre about to get married right? when is your wedding going to be? (sorry if im prying, but i love to hear about wedding stuff. its so cute).

:D awesome chapter!

love this story

My suggestion would be for you to slow it down more. You have alot of great ideas, and the plot keeps its interest so you can slow down a bit. The last chapter or two seem a little rushed. Also you should probably tie in Kon-Koshi soon, since he was so crucial to the beginning of the story. he was personally my favorite

I like is so far, but I miss the first guy that you had in the story, Kon something? he kinda just dropped out of the story for twelve chapters

Woot,awesome chapter!

Great story! It's entertaining and well-written. Hope you update soon.

Dude! You have to update! I love this story so much! Please don't give up on the story! It is so awesome it's not even funny.. I'm like addicted to it.. I have to know what happens...