no way!

Can't wait for more!

WTF she better not kill him! :(

omg what ?

what is she gonna do now...she is not going to do it right ?

:(

thanx for the update

oh shit

poor Frankie, it was so sad, and they're going to kill Joel after all:(

Oh my goodness this chapter was amazing.I loved it and believe me when I say i'm not just saying that. I truly cannot wait for the next chapter.

I'm sorry but.. WHAT? Oh, she better not kill him or I will march down to her, slap her, and then knock some sense in her(even though she's a character in a story).

dang. the nds has some serious ego issues :D

thanks for the update! cant wait for the rest!

oh my i can't wait for the next chapter.

le gasp no!

Omg what a cliffhanger! I can't wait until next chapter. I love the maincharectars personalitys btw

keep it up, you have great talent as a writer;)

Oh damn! The tables have turned!

I'm wondering if it really was Lewis's plan not to protect Joel like he claimed but to set up Joel so the NDS would kill him instead of him having to do it himself to become king.

-Liz :D

0.0 uh. WHAT? whyy must the NDS kill Joel? He's an awesome vamp! XD I really g2 read the next chapter. REALLY NEED TO. lol.

please update soon! x love youu~

delineations. x

this is a big problem for frankie

Yes, that's going to be a huge problem... amusing though.

And thanks for clearing that up, it makes more sense, and now the NDS are going to do exactly what the vampires were afraid of...*gulps*