I absolutely adore Frankie's character. love her spunk.

That was a really great story, well set out.

However I have noticed that through a few of your stories I've read(I don't know if you get confused between stories) that while writing about two characters (Like the chapter when Frankie and Anna, were dress shopping) you have changed names, for about a paragraph (like Anna became Rachel).

Despite the reviews, I don't think this was such a great story. Yes, you write beautifully but the story didn't click.

There isn't enough proof to show that Frankie is an assassin and is protecting Joel. Yes she gets an assignment but during the jogging and shopping, when does she protect Joel? You focused so much on other things than actually developing the characters. It seemed unrealistic.

You'll hate my review, but know that I read this and will favourite it.

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Ohhhhh what an awesome story!

I felt that you drew out theis story wonderfully. Their relationship progressed at a well pace, but the end was too rushed. In your stories you have great endings and in others they are just so rushed...you could have made it more dramatic. i felt that they got married and everything sorted out too quickly. It was great though, i loved it. but if you were ever going to fix this story up, start back here first

:( i dont really like this ending. it felt a little bit too anticlimactic and unrealistic to me...

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No! this happened to fast for frankie. Joel is just messing with her to get her in his bed...this is frustrating

wait, what was that? those visions? hahaha! this is funny. I love how he calls her tinkerbell. all of your guys always have a this sacastically cute nickname for their ladies ;)

I kind of really like lewis right now...i really hope he's not a bad guy. and i like his fiance better, even if she hasn't spoken yet

It's a good story but it feels like you rushed the end. Nice characters. There were a few times where you called the characters by the wrong names but beyond that pretty good.

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