Reviews for The Vampire's Executioner
Preposterous chapter 2 . 6/22/2012
I absolutely adore Frankie's character. love her spunk.
Skylene chapter 31 . 6/21/2012
That was a really great story, well set out.

However I have noticed that through a few of your stories I've read(I don't know if you get confused between stories) that while writing about two characters (Like the chapter when Frankie and Anna, were dress shopping) you have changed names, for about a paragraph (like Anna became Rachel).
non.graceful chapter 31 . 6/15/2012
Despite the reviews, I don't think this was such a great story. Yes, you write beautifully but the story didn't click.

There isn't enough proof to show that Frankie is an assassin and is protecting Joel. Yes she gets an assignment but during the jogging and shopping, when does she protect Joel? You focused so much on other things than actually developing the characters. It seemed unrealistic.

You'll hate my review, but know that I read this and will favourite it.
3rd bookorm chapter 32 . 6/13/2012
thats awesome news!
3rd bookworm chapter 17 . 6/12/2012
is it me or sre you quoting ever after?
carleyshake chapter 1 . 6/4/2012
Ohhhhh what an awesome story!
Candescence chapter 31 . 5/31/2012
I felt that you drew out theis story wonderfully. Their relationship progressed at a well pace, but the end was too rushed. In your stories you have great endings and in others they are just so could have made it more dramatic. i felt that they got married and everything sorted out too quickly. It was great though, i loved it. but if you were ever going to fix this story up, start back here first
Candescence chapter 30 . 5/31/2012
:( i dont really like this ending. it felt a little bit too anticlimactic and unrealistic to me...
Candescence chapter 26 . 5/31/2012
i love your butlers
Candescence chapter 22 . 5/31/2012
No! this happened to fast for frankie. Joel is just messing with her to get her in his bed...this is frustrating
Candescence chapter 21 . 5/31/2012
wait, what was that? those visions? hahaha! this is funny. I love how he calls her tinkerbell. all of your guys always have a this sacastically cute nickname for their ladies ;)
Candescence chapter 11 . 5/31/2012
I kind of really like lewis right now...i really hope he's not a bad guy. and i like his fiance better, even if she hasn't spoken yet
Tammy Rae chapter 30 . 5/10/2012
It's a good story but it feels like you rushed the end. Nice characters. There were a few times where you called the characters by the wrong names but beyond that pretty good.
Guest chapter 19 . 4/7/2012
Guest chapter 19 . 4/7/2012
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