i also loved this. i think you'll be the second writer i read everything she wrote

Who's Rachel?

This is just lovely. :)

I like the contrast in love between werewolves and vamps. Werewolves have love at first sight and pure loyalty unquestionably when it happens. But it takes forever for a werewolf to fall in love, and their loyalty is questionable until then.

And that humans can be a mix between both. :) Very intriguing.

Yeah... right. -.-

So far I can't say if I like your story or not only because nothing major has realy happened, but one thing that struck a chord with me is the fact that you say that Frankie is the best assassin of the NDS, but then go on to say how she doesn't think she will be able to handle herself against one vampire. It's alittle contradicting and I only noticed because that is one of my biggest pet peeves, when there is a suppose strong female character who ends up not being as strong as she was first percieved to be. I don't mean for this to be a negative comment, just one to let you know my thoughts, because i really love your stories and it was just that one fact that kept poking me in the side. LovePeaceAndHappyEndings

Well, so much for not reading your stories because I have exams coming up soon. I must say, your stories and Minesweeper make it really difficult to be productive :P

Anyway, onto the story. I just have to start off by saying that I usually don't actually like vampire or werewolf stories but yours was really good. I think the reason I liked it because the whole vampire thing wasn't really the main part, it was just sort of there to enhance the intrigue which is the bit that really made this story I think.

I didn't expect that it was actually Frankie that they were after and I didn't realise it was going to be Joel's brother protecting his brother which is kind of sweet in a way but it would've been so much better if he had realised that the fact they loved each other would save him in the end.

But yes, I very much enjoyed this story, it was great and I will try and read your next story soon (even though I really shouldn't...)

Liking it so far. Almost didn't stop to write this review. I think Dragulia is a little too close to Dracula for me though. It's going to get old fairly quickly throughout the story. I think if you were going for the classic vampire them Dravania would have been a good choice. A little bit of Dracula with a little bit of Transylvania without being too obvious as to take away from the story...Anyways, just my opinion. :)

i have both of your Nocturnal Defense Society stories and i love them you should write a third because they are amazing!

M, I like! This was a little slow moving, but great nonetheless. It was amazing!

Nice ending. But I sort of feel like it was kind of rushed. But still well written nonetheless! Definitely going on my favorites!

Alright first off, I'm pretty sure if Joel weren't giving Frankie erotic images of the both of them, she wouldn't have succumbed to her desires. But hey, that's the best part of this story! And I wished that the gunman shot Mari first before actually shooting Joel. Boo. Haha is that awful of me to ask for?

I hope you realize that you accidentally called Anna, Frankie's best friend Rachel in Chapter 17, when during the whole time she was being introduced in this story, she's always been called Anna. Just pointing that out.

i read the entire story today... i never thought she would be the target but happy that the two of them got together in the end.

the last chapters were a bit rushed compared to the earlier chapters. but i like the ending...i am a sucker for sappy endings - specially weddings!

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