Another brillint story. I can't stop ading tem! :)

WHAT?

WHAT!

SERIOUSLY?

I absolutely LOVED this story!

You did a fantastic job in writing this.

I fell in love with your main characters and I loathed the antagonists.

did you change anna's name to rachel?

but why is she being hunted now? what did he do to end up having to be assasinated?

why does he have to die? Did he order the hit on himself?

NO!

WHY WOULD SOMEONE WANT TO KILL HIM! THATS HORRIBLE!

...what? a twist!

o.o

oh...

Hello...he's basically telling her that he loves her! neither realize that yet...

i like frankie. i think she's sassy. they always make good heroins...

Wow. This story was amazing. You wrote it so well, and it was a pleasure to read. Keep up the great work!

I do like this story very much, but I do wish you would have expanded some. The murder plot is never really fully explained (like how they did it) and why was Frankie supposed to kill Joel? I don't think that's ever explained. What about Carl? It's a good story, it might need some editing though.

i'm obsessed :D

and i especially loved this "Edward Cullen had nothing on her man."

SO. FREAKING. TRUE.

perfect ending (:

Hey, your stories are pretty creative and entertaining. I like your style.

I wanted to let you know that in this chapter you got you characters confused. You called Anna - Rachel just in case you decide to edit.

Thanks for sharing your creativity.