Reviews for You
letyoursoultakeflight chapter 1 . 12/14/2009
Really love the way you did this one!
wo bu ai ni le chapter 1 . 12/12/2009
Wow, this is amazing. I like the unnaturalness in the last stanza, and the almsot formal address of 'You', as if the poet sits down to this task for forgetting. Nice explanatory verse at the top & quote. Just amazing :)
Icrome chapter 1 . 11/20/2009
Different, enjoyed it