Reviews for You
letyoursoultakeflight chapter 1 . 12/14/2009
Really love the way you did this one!
fleur de l'est chapter 1 . 12/12/2009
Wow, this is amazing. I like the unnaturalness in the last stanza, and the almsot formal address of 'You', as if the poet sits down to this task for forgetting. Nice explanatory verse at the top & quote. Just amazing :)
night62611 chapter 1 . 11/20/2009
Different, enjoyed it