Reviews for The Only One in My Heart |
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![]() ![]() ![]() So I definitely loved this story. :] And it makes me sad that is came to such an abrupt end. But, I really did love it. And I thought you did an amazing job. Especially with being so young at the beginning. Thank you for writing this. Yours truly, Luna Turner |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed reading your story. I really like Joyce and Jerret. I'm glad it all worked out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story so please make a sequel! |
![]() ![]() I love it! Great way to end. It lets the reader realy think forthemselves! ME LIKEY! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yep! I love it. I just wished you also wrote Jerret's POV. :/ |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww finished, can't wait to read your other stuff |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, it's finished. Sweet ending. I liked how you've brought them together and left it to the reader to continue their story. I'm gonna miss seeing the chapter update alert in my inbox. _ Congrats finishing your first story! :D I'm guessing the feeling's bittersweet. Happy that you've finally finished it, yet sad that you're letting the characters go. And it's been a long time since you've started it. Four years! Wow. I'm guessing you're not really gonna do a sequel then? My favourite character was obviously Jerret. Was rooting for him the whole time! He's so sweet. If only guys like him existed in the real world more... *dreamy sigh* lol I'll check out your other stories soon! Take care, keep writing and congrats again! Lovely ending! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for writing this! |
![]() ![]() HELLOYELLOHI Wow, spam much Music Read Luv, LOL. She rushed it coz she needs to get the story off of her chest, if you read the authors note. That distracted me, lmfao, anyway. I just read this story through now, and I think your writing is amazing. You could really go somewhere with it one day. I know you think that this story is crap and all that, and I know you can do better, like your story, boundless that I'm in love with, is beyond amazing, but this is seriously amazing also! I couldn't stop reading and your wording is refreshing. I really liked your characters and the fact that every time they tried to date, something would get in their way. Poor, poor characters. But, hopefully now they've sorted everything out! I love the last lines especially and how you used the title for the last lines. That's smart of you. :) Well, anyway, I have to go, but this was amazing and you are amazing and I'll be sure to continue reviewing your other works. Though work/school gets in the damn way. GAHH! LOL. ] But, I'll try my best because you are a wonderful author, and I know you are going to tell me to make a FP account soon, but I don't know if I should. IDK, I'll tell you later by email. ] Okay, so I loved this and I love your writing and you are wonderful and so is this story and the last chapter too! GREAT! XOXOXOXO JUDITH RAWR? |
![]() ![]() ![]() DIE!(not really) U TOTALLY RUSHED INTO THE END! U SHOULD OF AT LEAST MADE LIKE 1 OR 2 MORE CHAPTERS TO END IT INSTEAD OF JUST TOTALLY RUSHING INTO THE END! P P P P P P P P P P P P P P P P P P P P P P P P P P P P P P P P P P P P P P P P P P P P P P P P P P P P P P |
![]() ![]() ![]() just to clarfiy but that was like thier happy ending right? together forever and blah? it was very good broke my heart but it patched it up at the end |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well I guess I have a wee small spot of sympathy for them..I mean, they went throught ALL OF THAT! Just to end up together again. I do respect your ending though, it's not cliche like other peoples are, which is a very good thing fyi. On other stories they're so boring and predictable, but yours...yours is SPECTACULAR! Hahaha, that should sweeten you up, ah. Aw, thanks! I love you, and your unbelieve story too! x) Your Fan for Life -Cassandra Elena Gonzalez (That's my real name! ;) I could have added my other two last names but that would be way too long, I'm rambling aren't I? Shoot, I really need to get a hold of that..lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, sad that it's over now, but it was an amazing story :) sequel maybe? :P ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() yeppers! well i will deffinitly read other stories of urs and i will always luv this story! Luv ya! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was fantastic! I loved it so so so so much. Kinda unhappy to see it end. :( But you did a great job! Much love, Hemii25 |