Wow, I'm seeing a slight change in Mackenzie. I'm really liking where this is going. Keep updating! Great job.

this story is great! Please update again soon. Love the characters by the way.

So I finally got a chance to catch up, and read chapters 2 and 3. My gosh, Ashley, I'm blown away. I loved both chapters, they were great! In the second chapter, don't even worry, you perfected the emotions so well. I love Mackenzie and Austin's relationship, its refreshing in a way, as them being brother and sister. But by far, my two favorites are Tyler and Josh. I really can't wait to read more, and see where you take this one. Looks like another favorite! [

all i can say is this chapter just makes me go 'aw'. I love the distinct personalities you give all three of the boys, and that Mackenzie is acting just the same as always. I think my favorite character is Tyler.

"It was just scary"

I liked this chapter a lot better than the last one. I think you conveyed the character's emotions very well. I can't wait to see what you have in store with this story. ]

I like this story. Not to be mean or anything, but at first I had a little of a hard time getting into it, but I definitely like the end of the chapter. You also did a good job with characterization.

This story is very well written, and i know it sucks as a writer not to get constructive criticism, but i really don't have any complaints. I'm anxiously awaiting insight into the characters of the three boys.

Keep up the good work, and i would write more but I'm heading off to check out your other story now. Please continue this, I'd love to see where it goes.

I really like this. I especially love how you use typical teenage problems in your stories. It makes it more realistic and many can relate. Good job as always, keep writing!

Hello! So I finally got a chance to review this and it is good. :) The only thing I would say is both your stories have the same type of main character,the girl who hangs out with all the boys, whether it be with her brothers or friends and stuff like that. Both are very good and you definitely do a good job of hitting a bunch of teen problems but I'd like to see you try something different and see where that can take you too! :)

Happy Writing!