|Reviews for birthday|
| Sadira chapter 1 . 11/22/2009
I can imagine you staring into your birthday candles, eyes glazed over, dreaming these words. What I like about your poetry is that it gives weight to things that many people just let glide off with the wind. Such a simple and truthful sentiment, beautifully measured and expressed.
| Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 11/21/2009
Powerful piece. I really enjoyed reading this. This was great great great! Write on.