| Reviews for Car Grease and Diamond Earrings |
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  gulistanlik chapter 4 . 11/8/2010 I think I've already reviewed this story but this is probably the third time I'm reading this. And that's saying something considering I rarely read something more than once. This is one of my personal favourites being it really is emotionally gripping, sweet. You can wholeheartedly feel how Jake and Gretchen feel for each other- affection, want, cherishment, desire. I love how you've captured the epitome of the beginnings of love- a possessive and passionate sort of love in this one. While there are spelling and grammatical errors, it does little to hinder the emotion that pervades this piece. Congratulations on a job well done and I wonder when I'll want to read this again! Keep up the good work! |
| Ashley chapter 4 . 11/3/2010 Love it. |
 Bubbly Girl chapter 4 . 8/16/2010 Absolutely Amazing. Great job! :) Peace, Love and Happiness! :) ~Bubbly Girl |
| Natasha Dust chapter 4 . 7/5/2010 I've got one word for this... ADORABLE! ;) Did you make a story about Marcus? I found him intriguing and the mystery about his supposed 'love' is even more so. :D |
| DELETE THIS ACCOUNT NOW 323402 chapter 4 . 6/22/2010 this is the greatest short sotry eva :D |
| DELETE THIS ACCOUNT NOW 323402 chapter 1 . 6/22/2010 aw... jake is a ture sweetheart & already abe sounds like an ass this is really cute [[i love it]] |
| Francine Brown chapter 4 . 6/7/2010 This was a nice short story :D I enjoyed it heaps ~Francine Brown |
| Gethsemanee chapter 4 . 5/2/2010 You have a fabulous writing style and I loved this story. Really good job :) |
| Georgia chapter 4 . 5/2/2010 This is the best story ever. X) You have so much talent, at first I was all like "but it's so short!" then I read the story. It is amazing and I don't mind that it's this length because you've written it so so well. This just made my day! :D Thank you, thank you, thank you : ) |
| cmc21 chapter 4 . 4/12/2010 Ok, I don't know how you managed to make me cry with only 4 chapters, but by-God you have! When Jake started his speech about what could have happened had they met earlier, I just started sobbing! Lovely words. as I was reading I was listening to 'Lullaby' by The Spill Canvas, and it fits very well with the story, if you ask me! |
| I Murder on Impulse chapter 4 . 4/8/2010 LOVE this story! It's pretty damn amazing :D xx Ali |
| Cecily Mitchell chapter 4 . 4/5/2010 Very cute. Love it |
| MadameLeQueen chapter 4 . 4/2/2010 Love it(: super sweet and lovely :D |
| adura chapter 4 . 3/4/2010 love love the stories, wish it was longer then 4 pages |
| E. M. Isle chapter 4 . 1/17/2010 short and sweet. i really enjoyed reading it |