Reviews for Day Dreams
Creative Pumpkin chapter 9 . 11/9/2010
have you been pregnant? seriously! how do you know all this detail?
AMZIEXXX chapter 9 . 11/8/2010
AW! So sweet. I think this is my fave chapter too.

Can't wait for the next chapter!


Creative Pumpkin chapter 8 . 10/19/2010
YOU MEANIE! JERK! HOW COME YOU MADE ME WAIT THIS LONG, AND IT'S NOT EVEN SUPER LONG! and guess what? i basically forgot everything, so i had to go to the previous chapter and read it all over again to refresh my memory! hasn't it been like, 2 MONTHS? anyways, awesome! can't wait for more! hurry up and post some more up before i get obsessed with a DIFFERENT story!
AMZIEXXX chapter 8 . 10/19/2010
WOW... That sounds painful. I love the fact that you go from POV to POV give me an insight to waht people are thinking.



AMZIEXXX chapter 7 . 8/28/2010

This is really good. I love the names you picked for the twins and I wish you luck in writing the next chapter.

Can't wait!


fromtheheart101 chapter 6 . 8/13/2010
u r most certainly welcome! I love this chap! Hikaru and Kaoru... really? HAHA that is the funniest! And yeah i have owner ship over middle names! Hoorah!
Creative Pumpkin chapter 7 . 8/8/2010
NO! She should end up with Mike, he obviously likes her alot, what with the over protectiveness and all... anyways, OMGosh! BABIES! BABIES! IRISH NAMES! you know, that's another reason why she should end up with Mike. Her babies are gonna have Irish names, and Mike's IRISH! AUGH! AUGH! THEY'RE PERFECT FOR EACH OTHER!
Creative Pumpkin chapter 6 . 8/1/2010
A! Stop building up the suspense! Anyways, she should dump them both and live on her own, but then keep them as friends, kinda like divorced parents, except now there are two dads. hurry up and write the next chapter!
Creative Pumpkin chapter 5 . 8/1/2010
:o no! actually, yes! i actually like matthew more than danny... probably because i have a younger cousin named danny and he's super annoying... good job! this story kinda reminds me of city of bones, which is a really good book...
Creative Pumpkin chapter 4 . 8/1/2010
okay, i liked it, but it got kinda confusing when the POV changed, but that's the only flaw
Creative Pumpkin chapter 3 . 8/1/2010
Creative Pumpkin chapter 2 . 8/1/2010
:o no! so sad for matthew! he liked her for more than two years after they broke up, that's crazy!
Creative Pumpkin chapter 1 . 8/1/2010
Oh no! why did she break up with matthew? :(
Charlotte Meander chapter 6 . 6/18/2010
Well, what can I say? It's amazing. You always improve with every chapter that you write, and I'm realy looking forward to reading the rest of this story. It better be long and fulfilling K.

guess who
Keeana Davis chapter 3 . 1/7/2010
Holy COW! Sorry I haven't commented. School and everything is taking all my time. WOW! This is really really good! I don't have any suggestions at the moment because you're doing so good. I liked the kind of foreshadow before this chapter about the baby. Wow. You should totally go through the process of finding out the gender and the baby shower and getting the crib and doing the room and everything! WOW! This is just so good! Keep up the good work! :D I'm excited now! :D EEP! Lol.

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