Reviews for I’ve made an, executive decision
thinking.about.thinking chapter 1 . 12/14/2009
Brilliant. Fictionpress has really helped me discover poetry and the countless forms it comes in, and I love your form. It really helps convey your message, and is very unique. I also love the P.S., it really adds vulnerability to your poem, in contrast to the first few stanzas.
the art of being obsolete chapter 1 . 11/28/2009
whoa. I love the punctuation, especially the "In addition!" opening to the second stanza.
rain is acidic and we are time chapter 1 . 11/22/2009
you make me want to fall in love,

because it sounds just a little like

suicide.

(masochism)