Reviews for Ichiwa
IceKazuka13 chapter 1 . 10/1/2012
It's a nice touch to a first person kind of view. To have the main character as the narrator kind of puts readers in the main character's shoes. But I wonder what inspired you to write this. Picturing someone break apart into butterflies reminds me of Inuyasha or a ninja anime. Kind of gives me ideas for three of my stories since they go into detail like this one. I'd love to see much more of this as it goes along, even though I may have to reread parts to make sure I can follow the story. Though I have to mention that this seems much more supernatural based than drama based.
Kaye Valen chapter 6 . 1/8/2010
Lovely new chapter! I like the character exposition, and your transitions are seamless. Looking forward to more.
Kaye Valen chapter 5 . 1/7/2010
Tatsumaru might prove to be a fun character, but he sounds kind of... off.

Honemei is so adorable! I am going to like him so much, I know it.
Kaye Valen chapter 4 . 1/7/2010
"Your customs of eating are strange" - that line basically nailed it for me.

The way you write their character interactions are very fluid and effortless. Honemei's innocence with Ichiwa's blunt practicality make an interesting juxtaposition.

Keep it up.
Lackadaisy chapter 4 . 1/3/2010
Honemei seems cute :D And Ichiwa is quite practical. Keep it up!
Aai chapter 1 . 11/27/2009