Reviews for Innocent Intentions |
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![]() ![]() ![]() lol that really made me remember those buffy days... ahaha. loved the ending statement. :p i'm pretty late, but i'll catch up. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh what an awesome chapter. I totally agree with Jeremy, dancing is evil. Especially when it's with someone else. I truly hope Jamie isn't going out with Devon for the fact that he did piss off Jeremy. That's like playing with fire you can't handle but you do it anyway because someone says you can't. If you get what I mean. Anyway, digressing. Can't wait for the next chapter. I think I forgot to put this story on my alerts when I first started reviewing so I'll do that now. - |
![]() ![]() ![]() No Devon is back i hate that evil (insert curse word here) but it's sweet how Jeremy said one dance and stayed on the dance flour till the last song forty minutes later lol. well till next time i can't wait. |
![]() ![]() Thanks for your comments. I think I do have an account, I'm just too lazy to sign in. I'm not a writer or anything just addicted to reading. Why is Prom always so dramatic? It's like someone says "time to go to soap land" or something wierd like that. |
![]() ![]() Aw, Ruthie is adorable! and still not a fan of Jamie but, hey, I can't complain, can I? The best part of this chapter wasn't the sex, it was the fluffiness of the sex (And the walk-ins and divulging of sex lives etc...) BUT, I cant wait for the next one! Excelent Little Brother! You're growing up so fast *tear* D |
![]() ![]() ![]() This has got to be, by far, the most enticing chapter ever! Oh man you had me in stitches at the dinner table scene with the uh...inuendo playing in his mind and the reality of their wants. At least those two finally got some peace and quiet to...well, you know. As I said, this chapter is by far my most personal favorite. I can't wait to see what kind of crazy randomness you're going to come up with next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Eh. I'm going to break my rules and go ahead and review on chap 2. (Your A/N made me. xP ) Your little lemon in the first chapter was just.. wow-worthy. You didn't go into explicit detail but if the mind knows the deal, can guess (or picture) everything anyways. I give you an imaginary cookie for that. Though, after reading scenes like that for .. a few weeks? Months? .. yeah.. it's not hard to guess whats going to happen. All scenes are repetitive when it comes to sex. The second chapter was amusing. Took me a few seconds to figure out what CJCJCJCJCJ meant.. BUT I GOT IT! :D I'm overly eager to get back on the net tomorrow and continue reading - I wanna find out about Sam:) Luck writing. ~ibbit |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, I LOVED LOVED LOVED THIS STORY! Please update soon! I absolutely LOVE all the sexy scenes. You are, without a doubt, the BEST slash writer I have ever read! All those sexy scenes are very arousing. ;) I LOVED all the juicy details. Keep up the amazing work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved this! Definitely understand this frustration... but it was SO cute! update soon! -K. |
![]() ![]() Haha! nice chapter. I understand how frustration it can be to almost have sex but keep gettin interrupted! omg i've been there and it's horrible but u get so horny and when u do have sex it's a blast! haha. thanks for the chapter, love u! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I figured that would happen to them eventually. I'm also not surprised that Jeremy just went back to Cole. Cole seems like Jeremy's way to just relax and take a load off that's a good thing. I still love them both. |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL I FOUND 'FUCK' TWENTY TIMES IN THIS CHAPTER XD (this is Alice. Creeping on your FictionPress 8D) Oh, Cole is such a slut XD DAYUM BOY, PORN IN THE FIRST CHAPTER? 8D GAH, you have 21 chapters. I'll read more later! But but but THIS WAS HOT 8D 8D 8D Hehehe. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a change of well i don't really know but hey it was funny. there seems to be your addiction to abusing them by having everyone walk in on them lol till next time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter made me giggle. Poor Jeremy and Cole, being interrupted constantly. Glad you found time to update! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() PAAH sexual frustration. Made meh giggle :P Mhm very nice! MOARNAO plzkthnxbai |