Wow! That was excellent. I really enjoyed how each "section" of this chapter held different flavors- the comedy of the time-out, the lust of the smut, the afterglow of the next morning... each carried a separate emotion and feeling that was well-communicated. People talk like they do, not like their English teacher wants them to, and the realism clashes wonderfully with the purity of the emotions on display. I like it, I like it a lot... I think you're back :)

sorry for the late review on this chapter my computer is broken and i can't get on that often so till next time see when i can.

~Turquoise~

Just finished all of the chapters and have been loving it. Thanks for a sex scene to tide me over haha. They survived away from one another before and they'll be able to do it again. Hope to see another update soon

I know this is way late, but I just had to mention that I am angry that you mentioned your cyst. Being the insanely odd person I am, I had to look it up. Not just what it is, but what one looks like. Again, being me, I didn't allow myself to turn away after seeing the images Google brought up. But this is coming from a girl who scrolled through an ENTIRE shock site, forcing myself to look at the disturbing images, out of curiosity. Don't tell me I need my head checked. It has been.

On a side note, I absolutely adore these two. I usually don't review until I've finished what's been published, but I felt I needed to explain that experience. :D

Don't worry; I scare myself, too.

Fantastic chapter. I didn't know you had this planned out. I just figured Kyle was the dick older brother. It was cool to have him step up to the plate for Cole and Jeremy.

Great writing as usual. This chapter flowed extremely well and you're descriptions in writing make it so easy for me to almost pictures these as scenes on a movie screen.

BRAVO!

I'm putting this on this chapter as I'm slowly making my way through them all. I have to say, I absolutely am loving this story.

What I love the most is your writing style and how you have decided to let Jeremy be the voice for the story. I really loved the chapter where you used Cole writing in a diary to tell his side and how the two characters really are written differently. In my opinion, you've written them so perfectly that they aren't really characters per se, they're real people.

I love how the story just seems to flow along. Even though you don't use a timeline, which can be difficult, you have done a fantastic job of going back and plugging in these little vignettes that incorporate something we've already read.

I hope the story continues because I'm hooked.

I hate being busy. I should have reviews this earlier but I haven't had the chance until now. I love this chapter. Cole being his same sweet self and look at Mr. Baker getting all bold and going for it. Great chapter to show the balance of the relationship.

Okay, I'm genuinely freaked out now. This is the night before Cole goes on vacation for 2 weeks. Tonight is also the night before I go on vacation for 2 weeks and will hardly get to talk to my boy. Also, throughout the story I identified with Cole and he identified with Jeremy xD This can hardly be coincidental...

Furthermore, WOW. That may well have been the hottest smut of your entire story! The amount of detail was... magnificent! Can't wait to come home to (hopefully) some new chapters in 2 weeks, although I can't promise I'll read them right away, as I'll first have some catching up to do :P

Lastly, don't worry, you'll find a beautiful and fantastic boy soon enough, you seem like an awesome enough person anyway!

I agree with Miyuki31393

Because Cole is leaving for Brazil here but in chapter 29 he is in brazil...oh well. It's still awesome! And I did not skip such sex scenes.

haha! You put Deadliest Catch i it too! You know me so much! I wonder how it's going to work out when Cole and Jeremy are seperated for 2 weeks... And what will happen when they see each other again? hmmm we'll just have to see ;) Update soon! asheepiage.

Like the chapter! I don't really like sex scenes so I had to skip it. Everything else was good though.

Was this chapter supposed to be before chapter 29?

Narrates how sweet I love the nice and peaceful moments in this story but then again who doesn't love the occasional action lol :) loveeed it sooo much 3 UPDATE SOON! asheepiage.

OMG HOW DID YOU KNOW THAT I'M COMPLETELY AND UTTERY ADDICTED TO BUFFY! okay calm, I have more chapters to read mwahahaha :D asheepiage.

I really am enjoying your work here. There are a few typos here and there but not the usual garbage that so awful it distracts the reader, and the content is good. Characters are what make stories worth reading I am liking both these guys and the red head.

Dude! This is amazing! xD I thought, since you're quite literally begging for reviews I'd send you one ;D. I got sent the link to your story yesterday from the boy I like ;) and read it all in a little over 24 hours xD so consider that a compliment. I feel sad about Sam leaving tho, she's my favourite character xD Please get the boys in the same university? Or would that be... too boring? Of course... your sotry, your rules, but it'd suck to see Cole and Jeremy separated soooo long...