Reviews for Innocent Intentions
lost in pale blue chapter 30 . 7/27/2011
Great chapter. I love the friendship they all have.
lawannab chapter 30 . 7/27/2011
I'm glad you didn't make Sam's college departure a sad sob fest. It was perfect considering Sam's personality.

I'm glad you're updating more. I missed these guys.
Karida chapter 30 . 7/26/2011
This is a perfect chapter! Especially for this time of the year. I really feel Sam's pain, so to speak xD, I leave for basic training in a few weeks and my friends I've had for years are going off for college...a happy and sad time and reading this part of Cole and Jeremy's lives with Sam makes me feel better about the changes coming around the corner.

Can't wait for the next update XDDD!
Nique13 chapter 29 . 7/25/2011
I absolutely love this story! I would've reviewed the other chapters, but I'm reading this on my iPod Touch so it takes a while.

Anyway, I will be waiting for the next update!
Wtf-Are-Scrambled-Eggs chapter 29 . 7/21/2011
Fantastic Story :) They're SO CUTE! I hope Kerry turns out to be nice and not some conniving bitch.. :) Good work!
jessicas favorite stories chapter 29 . 7/20/2011
so glad i found this story.

keep up the good work XD
lost in pale blue chapter 29 . 7/20/2011
I'm sorry you've been having a rough time lately. I hope things get better for you soon.

I'm really happy to see an update of this :-D It sucks that Cole and Jeremy have to be apart but texting is better than nothing. And at least Jeremy made a new friend.

I hope you're able to update again soon.
Lara-chan chapter 29 . 7/19/2011
Yay! You're back!

Don't worry, I wouldn't quit this story unless FP took it away from me!

Can't wait for more!
Turquoise Mage chapter 29 . 7/19/2011
Hey it's been a while i'm glad you're back, don't let life get you down too much if you believe things will get better then they well stay safe and happy i'll be waiting for the next chapter i'll keep with this story till you finish it even if i have to wait 50 years well till next time see you.

~Turquoise~
TinaLouise chapter 29 . 7/19/2011
It's good to see this update again. I'm sorry to hear that lives been pretty sucky for you lately. I hope that things start to look up very soon. Remember, while we may not have reviewed every chapter, we all read and enjoy your story. But more than that, we all want you happy and doing well.
lawannab chapter 29 . 7/19/2011
Cyber hugs to you and hoping you feel better soon. If you're interested FAFSA is the federal financial aid form we fill out since we have Hope to pay for the majority of college tuition in GA. They changed it this year but basically it will pay 90% of tuition as long as you maintain a B average the last 2 years of high school and all through college and you're parents don't make over $100 grand per year. Very helpful program.
Lady of black chapter 28 . 2/8/2011
Don't know if you thought of this and its sort of a cliche cause it's been done in a lot of romance things i've watched...carnivals! Fairs! Haunted houses! it seems like something perfect for Cole and Jeremy, especaily the haunted house. just suggesting.
Lady of Crimson chapter 28 . 1/31/2011
so i just read the whole thing in about a week or two and I'm wondering about Devons side of his story with cole. Maybe why he's so..."needy". Just a thought for later.
chaeli.mee chapter 28 . 1/3/2011
Hi! I just read this story through, and I've got to say I love love love it! I love the dynamic between Cole and Jeremy, and I really hope that you take their lives together into their adult future! I've noticed that a lot of people complain about your writing style of jumping around in the timeline (through your review responses) but I personally love that technique! I find it allows the story to move around more freely, focuses on parts that are important to furthering the plot rather than going through every minute they are ever together ever (a la 500 Days of Summer). Really fantastic work, and I can't wait to read more!
one of those deaf-mutes chapter 28 . 12/19/2010
Oh my sweet Jeezus, I adore this story. Cole Jeremy LOVE.

Admittedly, I only first clicked on this story because of the promise of sex, having been in a mood for smut. (Needless to say, I wasn't disappointed by the first chapter... XD;) But what I didn't expect was to fall in love with this - with Jeremy and Cole. Their relationship is just so beautiful and refreshing and GAH! I'm obsessed. And not only are their adventures enjoyable to read, both from content and writing style, but they're also the inspiration I've needed to get back into my own writing, so thank you!

And now, a few chapter-by-chapter notes:

1. Yes, it satisfied my desire for smut, but it was more than that. It's what made me read more and got me hooked. ;3

2. Poor Jeremy. But he's got Cole, and that's what matters. They're adorable.

3. Bad Devon. Cole to the rescue!

4. Jeremy's angst makes me sad. But I lol'd at the "FUCK YOU Pup". XD And they're still adorable.

5. Somehow, going to prom seems a lot more attractive after this chapter...

6. Have I mentioned how adorable they are?

7. Reminds me of how my parents learned about my girlfriend one month after we'd gotten together. They didn't catch us or anything, but my mom just suspected and randomly asked me if we were "going steady." XD Then she told my dad I had "news" and he called me while I was in the bathroom. Good times.

8. Aw, poor Cole. And Jeremy is sweet, sharing his nice family and all.

9. Haha, "weird." Still sexy.

10. Cole is so cute; I love having a chapter from his POV, and a Cole/Jeremy history lesson all in one.

11. I love them. They're adorable, by the way.

12. It's the best feeling in the world when nothing else matters because you're in love. Also, Ruthie is awesome.

13. Awkward family dinners are always fun. So is adorably-awkward Jeremy.

14. Birthday sex hot.

15-16. Yay for Cole bringing resolution to his family troubles. I also like how Kyle was the one to save the two of them, because even a complete dick of a brother can have a soft, protective side.

17. THEY'RE ADORABLE.

18. Hah, I've never actually watched Buffy, but being obsessive like I am, I definitely know what it's like to be that involved in something. XD

19. I know he doesn't mean any harm, but I still can't help but not like Jamie, and I feel bad, especially knowing what happens to him in later chapters. I guess I just don't like any threats to Cole and Jeremy's adorableness.

20. Somehow I seem to have neglected to mention that I also enjoy Sam. Well, I do, and her newfound love makes me happy along with Jeremy's social growth.

21. Poor, poor Cole and Jer. They really ought to pay attention to those door locks. Also, "Are you enjoying the blowjob?" and "angel fuck cake" killed me. XD

22. I understand Jeremy's issue: I hate school dances, but something about dancing with someone special makes them much more tolerable. And Devon is awful, I feel bad for Jamie.

23. Now I want to go to the beach, but it's the middle of December. Well, I suppose I probably could go still, considering I live in southern California.

24. Somewhat less-awkward family dinners are still fun.

25. That Devon, always causing trouble. Maybe one day he'll realize Cole is too good for him.

26. I don't like apple pie, but Cole and Jeremy baking it makes it seem a lot less dreadful. And yes, that's a compliment.

27. I haven't really thought about it before, but I think I have a thing for counter sex. And you've amplified that.

28. This chapter tugged a few heart strings, because I can totally relate. My ex-girlfriend (still my best friend, though) is a senior and a grade above me, and we always used to worry about what would happen to us when she went off to college. I guess it doesn't really matter now since we're not together anymore. XD Still, I'm sure that won't be the case for Cole and Jer, so best of luck to them.

Overall: LOVELOVELOVE. You're amazing.

Update soon please? I fear I'll die of anticipation.

~ceastical
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