Reviews for Innocent Intentions |
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![]() ![]() I'm an awful person. I didn't have time to review when this was first updated. I thought I would get back to it that day but... Applying to college is a bitch. I've been on my nephew's ass for months trying to get him in to take his SAT's not to mention trying to figure out what colleges to apply to. Then I remember that I'll be the one filling out the FAFSA forms and I'm ready to say to hell with it. Since this is fiction you can have Jeremy get a scholarship to Harvard and let Cole's parents buy his way in. Problem solved. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hohoho. i love thanksgiving. all the food, and gifts, and the merrymaking. loll. and pie sounds easier to make than it actually is. have you tried it before? my crust always screws up and then i just make the filling and eat it alone. in any case. the idea of alcohol-infused pie sounds good. alcohol-infused anything, actually. haha. yes, keep up the awesome writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ooh. devon is such a dick. that alliterates. cole is a pretty cool guy, eh. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well lokk whoo's bacck! Welcome! I still have fiath in you.. So till next update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well it's certainly been a while glad to see you back as always love the story. But i must say i hate the sadness i hope you don't steer down to sad ending lane i hate them but i don't think you would. Well until next time ~Turquoise~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I feel that since you decided that you didn't have to write for a while that I should also get an extention on that report. That and I really don't feel the need to change my taste in food for you. Although my friends also claim that it's weird. Anyway, your lucky that was a good chappy for taking so long. I feel bad for Sam but Cole and Jeremy better go to the same school. Im just saying. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Sam. But that's the thing about high school relationships. :( It's always hard to make them last in college. Hopefully Cole and Jeremy make it work. They seem to be able to go the distance. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so happy that your back! You have no idea how much I missed you! Cole and Jeremys 'fight' made their relationship more realistic for me, because I think this is an argument that serious highschool relationships deal with alot. So good job! Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay, you updated! It's so sad that Danny and Sam broke up, but that is a realistic situation for high school couples going to separate colleges. I'll hope that it's not permanent. I'm glad that it prompted Cole and Jeremy to have a conversation about their future. Sure, they still have a whole year of high school to go, but it is something they'll need to think about since they obviously don't want to and don't intend to break up. I hadn't thought about the fact that they've never had a fight until Cole mentions it. That's pretty amazing, especially for a teenage couple. They seem able to talk anything through, though, and couples who can do that are pretty healthy and have a great chance of working for the long haul. I love these characters so much :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved Cole's aversion to V-Day coming from one of the most romantic men it was funny although I admit I see his point perfectly. Love them both and loved the new chapter thanks for sharing x |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cole shared my opinion of V-Day ;) And whew, that last scene was exceedingly hot! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lip rings can definitely be sexy on the right guy. Cole could pull if off ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor, frustrated boys :D And yay, Sam for finally getting some! Also, and this might sound weird, but I want to thank you for writing *good* sex scenes. Some people just don't know how to write them (I'm not the best at them) and it ruins an otherwise great story. You are awesome at writing them, though. No awkward or stupid euphemisms and they're always hot! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm glad that Cole guessed Jeremy's fear about the future and allayed his worries. I'm also glad that Jeremy came right out and told Cole about Jamie liking him so that wouldn't be something to come between them because of Jeremy's insecurity. |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL Too funny. I happen to love Buffy and it is very addicting. But there are far worse shows to become addicted to :) |