|Reviews for I can't find you|
| JHeartbreak chapter 1 . 12/12/2011
I enjoyed this story a lot. But the ending is kind of confused. I get the feeling that this is sort of a spin-off of another story, since the characters have the same names as the title of another story you've written.
Anyways, I really enjoyed the poetic prose; I thought the sensual details were very well pulled together. You clearly knew what you wanted to bring forth and you did so. Characters and situations are delineated with extreme economy. I'm going on to check out the rest of your work.
| Quoven chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
I thought this was well-written. The topic is not typically one of my favorites, but your writing was good enough to keep me interested. I also liked how you hinted at something strange going on between the two characters earlier in the story, and confirmed it later as the motive for the attack. I found this to be quite well done.
Keep writing. You are very talented, and over time, many people will read your work. It just takes time :)