Reviews for DEVON
lipleaf chapter 1 . 11/24/2009
Ah. I could really feel the raw emotion in this, the passion you put into writing this piece. The anger and hatred came across particularly strongly. I think the last two lines were my favorite. The way you emphasize the fact that she only wanted him while you needed him helps instill a strong sense of injustice. The repetition of the line "Go ahead Devon, make her scream" was used very effectively. I could feel the author's bitter resignation to reality and the reminder that Devon was [hers], not the other girl's. Very powerful piece.
scoreboards.on.bedposts chapter 1 . 11/24/2009
and i want to fucking die.

this reminds me of a "Mean Girls" freak out, in a good way. i like it.

boys suck.

so do best friends.

the world is a better place without them.

[YOUR] world can be a better place without them.
your slightly terrified fish chapter 1 . 11/24/2009
what the hell happened? and if its hwat i think it is... well... my god i might kill them both...

but truely this is an amazing peace... but it makes me feel panicy for some reason /