Reviews for Break point |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was the perfect ending. I absolutely loved this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It feels like they're meant to be together. Though I do feel bad for Jennifer. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahaha Daniel's hilarious XD Poor Niklas, though. Very well-written first chapter. |
![]() ![]() I wish I could have that... And it was very sweet and realistic. Keep writing, and spreading happiness in doing so! |
![]() ![]() Smiles. This wasn't boring, it's great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this so much. I'm sure I'll reread this multiple times in the future. (x |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god! I love this so much! XD this is fictional right?... I mean, the story seems so real... :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this story it felt so real Daniel so romantic and Niklas so naive and in love they are perfect and the addition of William was perfect he make the story funny. |
![]() ![]() Ah.. Excellent. I needed something short-ish to follow 'For All Waters' to avoid sleeping and this was the one! The story is great. Slash, romance, all good. Also I came to expect the longer paragraph lengths from tearing through FAW today! Keep writing! Anyone who hasn't read but is interested should do so :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() "saying that he was staying with his "dad and bonus dad,"" This is so bloody cute. Awwwwwwwwwwww. sodhodifhgoidhfg. Well. I loved this story, it was short but perfect. And you're awesome. Loved it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed reading this story! I think the plot was interesting along with your characters. I especially liked how you let your character grow up and how he and Daniel got back together years later. It seems much more realistic that way. Kudos! |
![]() ![]() THIS. IS SO. GENIUS. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So much love for this story! 3 I loved absolutely everything: the slow pacing, the main two characters, their build up, the supportive characters - pure awesomeness! )))) Yesterday I planned to read a little and then go to bed, but I ended up reading this whole story in one go and eventually went to sleep only at 5 am. But I'm not sorry it was well worth it! Also I have to say I don't usually like it when the characters break up, some time passes, they change and then meet again and start over. But here you've made it work so good that I liked this part too! Now I'm off to read your other stories! )))) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have read this story so many times, I can't believe that I haven't reviewed this story before :O I just wanted to say that this story was really good :] I loved Daniel and Niklas's relationship, it was so unique, and well developed. I liked Daniel's subtle sarcasm too, it just added to his personality. Anyway, I really love this story, and you're a great author, so thank you VERY much for this fantastic story~! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it. Your stories are always wonderful, I don't know why I haven't read this one but I'm happy that I got to read it. I loved Niklas and Daniel. And how at the end, they got to be together :) |