So far, from the ones i've read i have loved all of your fictions. I know i'm bad at reviewing (sorry about that), but i love not only your plots, but your style of writing as well. This story in perticular took me much longer than usual to read as i kept trying to translate the "swedish" bits to swedish in my head... gave me a headache. But great writing, keep it up

Are you swedish, or have you lived in sweden or something, because if not, kudos to the cultural differences... Some things I haven't even thought much about myself (as a swede). Hope you keep writing... :]

W... Wow. This was ... impressive. I'm terrible at expressing myself, but what I mean is, you did a great job on this! The characters are so believable, and I loved William. Also, Charles' comment at the end made me grin like a fool. Cheers!

OMG, this was awesome! It was so compact but brilliant at the same time. So romantic even though they have to grow apart before finding each other again. I am glad that Niklas was able to grow up before getting with Daniel, would have been a little weird if they got together for ages when Niklas was only 18...

Awesome story!

This was simply wonderful! Loved how short and sweet this was, and yet how much content it had! Niklas was so relatable, just like me. And I'm at that limbo between the end of high school and the start of college as well. I really, really enjoyed this so much that I just don't know what to say! The writing, the plot, the romance, the ending, everything was very well done. I'm so sorry for the crap review but it seems that no matter what I say, nothing in this will be good enough to convey how fantastic a read this was. I seriously love all your work and I hope you never stop! Keep up the truly amazing writing!

I love this. It's so well-written, not boring at all, and I can't believe I haven't read it before now.

Simple and lovely story. I like the smooth flow of the plot and the underlying mild angst. I really, really love how you created Daniel-all mysterious and sexy; no wonder Nik really fell for him. I wish you'd write more about them. 3 chapters seems too short.

Cute story. I love that "dad and bonus dad" thing, that was quite heartwarming.

It wasn't boring it was wonderful, fluffy with enough drama it wasn't like puking out rainbows and the ending made me smile, Thanks.

aww wonderful. That was cute. I love how they separated and found their way back to each other afterward.

Certainly feels autobiographical though I'm sure it's not. But knowing that it feels that way I think ends up capturing a little bit extra goodness in the story.

Aw, that was a sweet little story! I have you on author alerts so I've had this open in a tab waiting to be read since you posted the first chapter, but I've not had much time to read.

I like 'dad and bonus dad'.

Aw, once again I adore your writing. These pieces of yours are both romantic and realistic, funny and sad. They always have happiness with a twinge of regret. I really like your style, hope to read more soobn.

keep Writing,

xxTunstall Chickxx

P.S. I liked the 'bonus dad' bit and how he reacted to it. Very cute.

That was amazing. I loved the whole tone of the story, and could imagine him actually talking in my head. It's an awesome story, and I loved it. Good job.

Lovely, as always. I adore all your stories, I wish you would post more :(

This was lovely :) I adore your writing; the update e-mail saying you'd posted a new story made my day. The "dad and bonus dad" bit was particularly charming, a great note to end on.