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dreamer-13 chapter 12 . 11/3/2011
"Life"? What's that? Is that an MMORPG?
dreamer-13 chapter 8 . 11/3/2011
...

I like fliptheswitch and tomorrow is cancelled...

Wow, I am really far behind... *shrug* that's what I get when I get bored and tired and start snooping for pillowbooks...
dreamer-13 chapter 6 . 11/3/2011
Red is my favorite color...

*shouts* I STILL LOVE YOU, RED! :D
metal butterfly chapter 25 . 3/5/2011
i know a genuinely horrible person called zack. :) just thought you'd like to know that. he's blonde, wears a name brand gillet and he shouts at my boyfriend in the street.
Minor Masterpiece chapter 6 . 1/9/2010
Oh, the entire idea of this one (the color naming convention!) was pure genius! (: Very, unique, creative, and confusing, wonderful (:

There might be three errors in this one though:

after the brackets did you mean "shall we"?

when you were talking about "dirty pale off white skin of a boy..." did you mean covered in "stars"

and controlled has two "l"s

yet again, you did wonderful(:

-exoh of The Review Marathon, there's a link in my profile
Minor Masterpiece chapter 4 . 1/9/2010
This one (sex lists) was very interesting. The beginning was very abstract and colorful, which I liked. And I love lists in poems and stories so I really enjoyed the entire list motif. There might (because yet again, I don't know if you PREFER it that way) another spelling error in the word I'd you added an 'e' but I'm not sure.(:

So, this was amazing, this entire thing is amazing, keep it up(:

-exoh, of The Review Marathon, there would be a link to that in my profile.
Minor Masterpiece chapter 2 . 1/9/2010
I love the pillowbook and the entire idea of the first story because- you format like I LOVE. The only thing you might want to check is in the first poem (we are all made of stardust!) I think you mistyped "listien" easy fix (: (and if you didn't mistype it, than cool idea of making up your own spelling!)

I'm gonna go read more, I really like this.

-exoh, of the Review Marathon, there would be a link to that in my profile(:
Little girl Big world chapter 34 . 12/17/2009
your welcome for coming. It was enjoyable to read.

Thank you for writing it :)
Little girl Big world chapter 33 . 12/17/2009
Glad you are feeling better on 10 dollar antibiotics.

Hope you find your journal so you can find your pen :)
i collect lullabies chapter 34 . 12/16/2009
well, even if i haven't reviewed (i started reading this only a few days ago and pretty much read every chapter in a few days), i enjoyed your pillowbook. (:
for shame chapter 33 . 12/16/2009
heh.

i have a strange attachment to stationery.

when i set shit down in my girlfriend's house, it always ends up under her bed.

i have no clue how.
for shame chapter 27 . 12/12/2009
i don't like eating pumpkin pie.

not the american kind, anyway.

the chinese version is so much

better. but i am asian, so that

may be the bias talking. hmm.
for shame chapter 31 . 12/12/2009
it's cold in california?

madness. southern california

must be toasty right now -

or at least toasty compared to

the hell's balls that is going

on outside of my house today.
for shame chapter 30 . 12/12/2009
i don't know anyone who only smoked pot once.

interesting.

there is something poetic about sharing air, sharing particles.

but nothing poetic when you begin sneezing into their face.

that just gets awkward.
Little girl Big world chapter 32 . 12/11/2009
I hate being sick :/

Feel better. & I'm a day late but goodnight!
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