hey plz update..! its really gr8 and mysterious..!

hey, was reading your story "A Love Story With No Name" it sounds really interesting...read all you have up...was wondering if you planed on writing more?

This is the first time I read this story and it seems to be really good. I like it because it seems that it's going to be more than just a romance story, you know, it seems like it's going to be real love, something passionate. And I look forward to reading more.

I can't wait to see how they meet up next time.

Oh my god, I couldn't even wait to read the rest before reviewing. So I'm stopping the urge to just go on and not review, because I know how much feedback is to a writer.

I thought the way you structured the beginning was well thought out, the narrator is interesting and way he/she depicts 'Derrick' pulls a reader right into the story.

I like the tad bit of vagueness and mystery, it gives an edge to the story and I think this was probably one of the most creative beginnings I've seen in FictionPress.

Beginnings are usually the hardest to write, at least for me, but you seem to accomplish it just fine.

I can't wait to read the rest and hopefully you'll keep writing, nothing annoys me the most but finding a good story and then noticing that the writer decides to just leave it unwritten.

Good Job ]

-IRYD

It was good. keep writing it. i liked it and want to see waht happens next!

"This is not a story based on high school romances. There are no vampires."

Thank god. You get so much props for saying that in your summary. Preach it!

oh-my-fuckin-god! this story is amazing! keep going!

I think this is kinda complicated, and so far not very interesting. So I would have to say..ugh...I would give you 2 out of 10 stars.

Great start. I hope you keep writing more!

You can't end it here! :)

I would like you to continue! :)

Great use of language too i must say. :)

Oh goodness!Why is there blod? And how is it secretive? This seems pretty good, actually. So continuee.