Reviews for Wings
Kanrei chapter 2 . 2/8/2010
nice-good ideas and stuff
Luna the wolf dancer chapter 2 . 2/2/2010
o a little suspense, nice job and the song was so cute - I can't wait for more and I'll into your other stories soon as possible D

Rayne
Kalista Jia chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
Your summary totally drew me in to read this amazing story...

"It is fear. I know there is something under the bed that should not be there. Maybe it’s just a mouse and I am being extremely paranoid. Yes, that’s it I am being paranoid. Then why do I hear someone else’s breaths?"

(OMG I WAS SO FREAKING scared... lol. I mean I am reading this at midnight and... lol... I am such a scary-cat for horror.)

As I read on... oh phew... it is not a ghost... phew silly me. _

Oh it is a wounded fairy-eh...-man

" “I need a place to stay. I like it under your bed. You let me stay here and I will give you many riches.”

“I don’t care about riches—“

“What sort of woman are you?” He inquired, sniffing her hair.

(I love his question. How cute)

LOL He just totally kidnapped her at the end. _

Cute story. I wonder how old is the girl. She sounds like a little kid.

Kalista Jia
Kanrei chapter 1 . 11/27/2009
ur sentences are a bit short but the story is good
Luna the wolf dancer chapter 1 . 11/26/2009
This is a very interesting introduction for your story and I can't wait to read more - please update soon