Reviews for Breaking Armor
ConfigurationSpace chapter 71 . 1/1/2015
I'm going to force myself to forget the last paragraph in this chapter and imagine they finally got the chance to live happily ever after.
Remy JaNae chapter 71 . 10/26/2012
Finished this in a day and bawled my eyes out more than once. I would say I hate you for that ending, but that wouldn't make any difference lol. But damn I was so hoping they would get a chance to be happy...then fucking Damien and Remy had to ruin it! (I hate Remy because we share the same name. Normally that would tickle me, but this Remy is no)
I gotta tell you, I had really hoped Alin had a chance to pull some sort of revenge on Amanda and Co. for that crap they pulled. Idk if I would have done anything different, but I would just let them without doing SOMETHING. Im glad she at least punched Amanda, but it wasn't enough.
Ok Adrien. Wow. Just wow. I thought years of killing like that would make him a robot but he still fell in love with her (slowly).
All in all, good story. I hate drugs or anything of the like so I was seriously hating on Alin for being a part of that. I thought she was smarter, but she kept surprising me. Especially when she just shot the guy tied to the tree as well as Damien. I'm rambling.
Couple of questions.
A: what happen to Damien's partner in prison? (If something happened to him I must've missed it)
B: did you intend from the beginning for Adrien to die at the very end, or is it an open ending where we don't know if Remy did shoot him, or he shot Remy? Even though he promised Alin, he probably would still have a gun out of habit. And plus all we know is that Alin heard a gunshot. Not who got shot. (sorry, this is a long ass question)
Ok I'm done bugging you. Hope to get a reply maybe! Thank you :)
LDS Dreamer chapter 71 . 6/2/2012
I couldn't stop reading it! It was so good! Though the ending put me on nerves. I really want to know if Remy killed him or not...
Nikki Vendela chapter 71 . 2/2/2012

Oh my goodness... I don't even know what to say. I guess I wanted a happy ending for them so bad, but at the same time there was no possible way for it to happen, and I knew that. My heart seriously breaks for Alin! It makes me wonder what's going to happen to her now.

This was truly an AMAZING story, and I am sad to see it has ended. This will forever remain one of my most favorite stories on ficion press. It deserves WAY more recognition!

I will definitely be watching out for more stories from you!
Nikki Vendela chapter 70 . 2/2/2012

Now I REALLY hope they can have their happy ending! I think they deserve it!
Nikki Vendela chapter 69 . 2/2/2012

I guess I had a feeling it wasn't exactly going to be happy quite yet. I was SO upset when he shot Moe :'( I just get overly sensitive when bad things happen to animals. But of course, I don't want anything happening to Alin or Adrien! I want them to be happy together without any worries! I hope Damien dies painfully and slowly!
Nikki Vendela chapter 68 . 2/2/2012
This is a much better life for her than her old one! Even that group of people seems much better than her old friends XD.
Nikki Vendela chapter 67 . 2/2/2012

I am SO happy! At first I thought she was going to say no! Thankfully she didn't though :)
Nikki Vendela chapter 66 . 2/2/2012
I was worried for a minute! I smiled when he pulled her from the bar :) I've been waiting for... I don't even remember how many chapters now... for her to leave those people behind! I hope she leaves and doesn't say goodbye to them!
Nikki Vendela chapter 65 . 2/2/2012
I found it amusing that Adrien was pretending to not speak English very well XD.

I really love how Alin and Adrien's relationship is so sweet and romantic one minute, but the next we don't really know what's going to happen. I hope he doesn't go anywhere! He did say he came back for her and I hope he stays for her too. Or at least if he leaves, I hope he takes her with him!
Nikki Vendela chapter 64 . 2/2/2012
I should have left this review AGES ago! College kind of gets in the way of fun things.

Anyway, I was so excited when Adrien was there! I hope he scares her "friends" off.
SnoQueen chapter 71 . 1/24/2012
This story was so worth reading! At first I saw 71 chapters and was SO close to moving to the next interesting sounding story...but then I took the challenge! :P

SUCH a good story...constantly kept me on the edge!

I'm just however, going to pretend I didn't read the epilogue (even though its good, its just not fair). So...AWESOME HAPPY ENDING! Loved it. :P

Keep writing coz you're awesome!

Dustland chapter 70 . 1/8/2012
So... I cheated. I read chapter 71 after I read about 20 chapters, because I wanted to see if it was a happy ending. anyways, then I went to this chapter, read the end and decided that I could keep reading it and pretend that the epilogue didn't exist. and that's pretty much what I did. therefore I got a happy ending

Beeni chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
I think i cried at the end.

He died?
We Used To Wait chapter 70 . 1/7/2012
Oh yeah! I forgot to say in my last review, I THOUGHT you were trying to make it fishy that Adrien would suddenly claim Damien was gonso, and you were! Forget what I said in the last review, about not knowing where the story was going, lol. You cleared the suspicions.
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