Reviews for Something Else
Sercus Kaynine chapter 7 . 1/8/2010
I love the story this piece tells. It's not something you see a lot on FP and I think you pulled it off well. The last stanza was chilling but beautiful.

Good job and good luck in WCC!
deefective chapter 7 . 1/7/2010
Lovely. I really liked how you wrote this. It had a soft, jilting melody to it that fit perfectly and I liked the abrupt flow as well. Also, that ending was fantastic. I can feel all the subtle melancholy behind it. Nicely done.
YasuRan chapter 6 . 12/15/2009
I actually quite liked this since I do have a partialness to abstract images and metaphors. It's a nice way to lead the reader into interpreting what the words mean. Good job!
YasuRan chapter 5 . 12/12/2009
Sweet work! I think the transition between the last paragraph and the line before it was a bit choppy but whatever, that's just my opinion. Otherwise, keep it up!