|Reviews for fall asleep|
| Dark Blue Lover chapter 1 . 1/30/2012
Short but beautiful, relaxing & comforting, lovely choice of words! Love this poem _
(Side note... is it ironic I'm getting tired? It's late around here... )
| cab fed hig chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
i like the string of thoughts put together
it makes me feel relaxed
| metacognitive chapter 1 . 3/20/2010
The violence seems calming, even. Your way of presenting this is beautiful, do keep writing :)
| wo bu ai ni le chapter 1 . 12/1/2009
Lovely imagery )
The last part I do every night XD
| tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 11/26/2009
so stunning and peaceful.
| i collect lullabies chapter 1 . 11/26/2009
i love it. (: its so relaxing.
| Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 11/26/2009
gorgeous imagery in this. lovely word choice.
i like the opening line. all in all just beautiful words :)
| letyoursoultakeflight chapter 1 . 11/26/2009
Pure relaxation :)