Reviews for Butterflies
Broken Winged Bird chapter 1 . 4/4/2010
This is cute... and so true. Butterflies is a *very* technical term... much more effective at describing the feeling than anything the brain can come up with. :)
sealednectar chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
I love butterflies, so had to check it out. A very clever poem. I've often wondered what that feeling really is. Good job. :)
girl like cheshire chapter 1 . 11/25/2009
me too :)

lovely. clever.

the short lines and repetition of "or" move it on/ keep it jumping like butterflies.