Reviews for Aspire
tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 12/25/2009
lovely metaphor!
steffxnie chapter 1 . 12/12/2009
Great haiku! Love the metaphor. Wonderful message. Keep up the good work!
thinking.about.thinking chapter 1 . 12/5/2009
So true. The happiness love brings you is worth the pain. Good job.
Isca chapter 1 . 12/4/2009
This is a very beautiful haiku with a powerful message. I liked the opening line in particular. :)
xoLOVEmeWITHnoRESTRICTIONSxo chapter 1 . 12/4/2009
I really like this :D

Good job.
wo bu ai ni le chapter 1 . 12/4/2009
An old message elegantly put :) The 'rare bird' idea is amazing. The title itself is quite inspiring too, as though love itself is something to look forward to in its own right.

Btw I love your profile picture - the painting looks pre-raphaelite. Who is she?

fleur
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 11/27/2009
Oh very nice! :) Well done, this is a great haiku! Write on.

Anna _
Ulquiorra9000 chapter 1 . 11/26/2009
Good one