|Reviews for Waiting|
| Isca chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
"I don't remember sitting down." I adore this line. It reminds me of those days when you go through life and can't remember how you got somewhere; you're on auto-pilot.
I like the repetition of "I am cold." It enhances the speaker's 'numb' emotionality.
"I will be here until we dream together." Stunning final line; it's breath-taking. :)
| Imminent Paradox chapter 1 . 11/26/2009
That was just... wow... I'm not even sure if there's a word to describe this.
Brilliant? That's pretty close :)
It's so sad. There was something about this that made me want to keep reading. It was probably the imagery you used, and the repitition.
Amazing job. I love it!
| HiddenFromYou chapter 1 . 11/26/2009
That was very powerful. I knew what was coming at the end, but somehow you still managed to give me the jolt as if I didn't.
I also the liked the repetition of "I am cold". It was threaded well through the piece, and put across the feelings of despair well.
| Aleksy The Flying Onion chapter 1 . 11/26/2009
Wow. Beautiful AND haunting. I don't have much else to say, really. .
Gonna go cry now, me thinks. Damn.
| Parapaxis chapter 1 . 11/26/2009