Reviews for A Thank You Kiss
Rooffoo chapter 1 . 6/19/2012
"...I'm here even though he rejected me for you're sake..."

That "you're," which is even italicised in your story, should be a 'your.' Sorry usually I wouldn't be so fussy, but since it was italicised it just really stuck out to me.

The ending felt a bit rushed but overall it was a fun read.
x Farii chapter 1 . 5/2/2010
Daitaro and Malinda Irwin?

That confused me :P

But uhh, Malinda screwed up, i get that xp

Loved how it ended x]]

:P
Kyllex chapter 1 . 4/4/2010
I liked this a lot. The characters are interesting and the idea is very original! Your writing is fantastic, also. (:
Wakao chapter 1 . 11/27/2009
Cool, I love assertive female characters. I think you could have developed this further, but the way it is now is just fine. I like the dialogue in this. Good job!
Aaerie chapter 1 . 11/26/2009
haha i love the ending
xThatNeverEndingHopex chapter 1 . 11/26/2009
I think it was well-written, but there seems to be a part missing...about how he seems to be ditching Melinda for Arielle. Did Melinda tell Daitaro the truth?

That was the only flaw I could find! It was very interesting to read!