Reviews for Addicted |
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![]() ![]() ADORABLE! I just love Jake, OMG! Can u make a sequel? Please? Like their first baby? |
![]() ![]() I loved it! Very good! (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very cute story. It was kind of cliche-y, but totally adorable. Jake seems like a very sexy guy! This might seem selfish but I was wondering if you could R&R my story. You don't need to if you don't want to; just trying to get more reviews and input. Keep up the great writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww MAN WAT IS DISSSSSSS?1? DIS IS FUCKING GOOD except of course d LIAM part ...its BEAUTIFUL ! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I found your story last night, and I got to say I really enjoyed reading it. Looking forward to reading future works from you. |
![]() ![]() i love the end. 'im horny' 'me too'. XD lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it! :D its so sweet...besides the fact Jake said nothing of that ever happened but suill :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello! I really, really liked this story you have here! (: The plot seemed perfectly plotted. This should be turned into a freaking movie. That'd be so cool x3 Hm.. what else... Um... oh yeah! Well when i was reading it, i was wondering why you didn't split it up into chapters.. Nonetheless it was gr-eat! Like frosted flakes (: Speaking of deliciously starched grains, I laughed so hard when Jake got excited about Maggie buying Cocoa puffs. xD Ah, splendid story, my friend. I hope you have a nice day. Byebye_ |
![]() ![]() cute! i know, not a very good review, but still a review, right? I love how it has a storyline and it has more of a recurring problem. the Liam guy always come back and... yeah! hm... I write really bad reviews.. :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() ek! so awesome! great ending xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really, really like this story. I couldn't stop smiling, well except for the parts when the douche Liam tries to rape her, but then comes Jake & I'm smiling again. Haha Anyway, great story, love it. ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, usually I don't like shorter stories because I don't feel the plot develops enough with a shorter story and if it does it seems rushed, but I REALLY REALLY liked this! It never seemed rushed and it has a story line that I've always liked. |
![]() ![]() ![]() haha I loved it. D Jake is adorable! he's the man! lol. great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved it... :) |