Reviews for Alpha's Dance
Lyra Waterflame chapter 9 . 11/3/2014
Hi. So, I know it's been a really really really long time, but your story is actually one of the best werewolf fics I've ever read, and one of the best originals I've read in a long, long time, and I was kinda hoping you might consider finishing it? It's extremely unique, and seems well thought out.

So please at least think about it?
laughing moon chapter 9 . 12/30/2011
E X H I B I T I O N I S T chapter 9 . 12/2/2011
Nice, totally didn't see that coming... I wonder where Rafe even is :S
bonghi chapter 9 . 10/19/2011
I found this story today and read it in one go. I really hope it isn't dead, please do not abandon it, it is too good.
charm en route chapter 9 . 6/7/2011
So, I really, really like this so far. The story is interesting and the characters are amazing. Everything Eris has done has been formidable and she definitely deserves respect. I hope you continue this story one day because it shows real promise.
Sharky237 chapter 9 . 1/31/2011
This has taken a much different turn then I would have thought. I think you have a really great story going on here and with just a little bit of editing and plot refining you could have an even greater story. I feel that Owen is kind of going by the wayside here. I would like him to be more of a central character in this story, equal or slightly less important to Eris.

I hope you update soon.


vksDC chapter 9 . 12/14/2010
It's amazing :) I hope you continue it
peachy pie chapter 9 . 9/20/2010
Awesome! I really like it
Jarvi chapter 9 . 8/26/2010
I like reading a story that has a strong central female character, rather then an overdependent one. This story is fun to read!
grumpirah chapter 9 . 8/20/2010
update soon!
midnight84118 chapter 9 . 7/23/2010
great story keep it up
anon chapter 9 . 7/9/2010
Woohoo! I like this story. :)
anon chapter 5 . 7/9/2010
I like the backstory here. There is drama, but not too much, and it makes good psychological sense in explanation for the way Eris is now.
anon chapter 4 . 7/9/2010
Eris is made of win.
anon chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
"Well, first of all I started this AGES ago and it's going to be my first attempt at a story with some conscious feminist effort. I felt the need to write this because so many female characters I run across nowadays are weak and they always seem to be submissive and dependent upon the men around them, which, to say the least, annoys me. Typically this can't even be justified by the time period the story is set in. " THANK YOU! THANK YOU! Seriously, that stuff was starting to scare me (especially since the worst of the weak/stupid/submissive female stories are written by females (on fictionpress) I blame Twilight.
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