Reviews for i don't do autumn romances
letyoursoultakeflight chapter 1 . 12/25/2009
The firt bit was good but so many do that, so I loved that you then compared it all to a tree full of life again ]
steffxnie chapter 1 . 12/12/2009
I love your descriptions.

'I enjoyed the way I could relate to the leaves

of autumn, because part of me was dying too.'

Great line. :)

I also like how you end this piece.

It has a tone of a mixture of things: sorrow, acceptance and hope. It's really wonderful.

I really enjoy reading your work. So please keep writing! :D
East-0f-Eden chapter 1 . 11/30/2009
I think it's a bit sad.
bbyxbanaaana chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
this is beyond cute.

the whole autumn and summer lover thing.

muy creativo.
drink me pretty chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
Short and simple and sweet.

You have a knack for getting

such vivid emotions across

with so few words, and I'm

always a sucker for season

Isca chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
"Because part of me was dying too." I love the tone of this line - it's so heart-breaking and powerful.
Not An Account chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
I liked how it was free-verse, but it had a sort of rhymey type rythm.

The emotions in this poem are portrayed excellently.

the ending was very strong!
Mirabella chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
So pretty. :) I like the analogies between the season's and the heart. :) It's like a natural cycle. :)

colorful chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
this reminded me of a song by regina spektor:

"Time is all around

Except inside my clock

Everybody's waiting for their lover to unlock

Leaves become most beautiful when they're about to die

When they're about to fall from trees

When they're about to dry up"

nice job. last line is perfect.