|Reviews for i don't do autumn romances|
| letyoursoultakeflight chapter 1 . 12/25/2009
The firt bit was good but so many do that, so I loved that you then compared it all to a tree full of life again ]
| steffxnie chapter 1 . 12/12/2009
I love your descriptions.
'I enjoyed the way I could relate to the leaves
of autumn, because part of me was dying too.'
Great line. :)
I also like how you end this piece.
It has a tone of a mixture of things: sorrow, acceptance and hope. It's really wonderful.
I really enjoy reading your work. So please keep writing! :D
| East-0f-Eden chapter 1 . 11/30/2009
I think it's a bit sad.
| bbyxbanaaana chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
this is beyond cute.
the whole autumn and summer lover thing.
| drink me pretty chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
Short and simple and sweet.
You have a knack for getting
such vivid emotions across
with so few words, and I'm
always a sucker for season
| Isca chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
"Because part of me was dying too." I love the tone of this line - it's so heart-breaking and powerful.
| Not An Account chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
I liked how it was free-verse, but it had a sort of rhymey type rythm.
The emotions in this poem are portrayed excellently.
the ending was very strong!
| Mirabella chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
So pretty. :) I like the analogies between the season's and the heart. :) It's like a natural cycle. :)
| colorful chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
this reminded me of a song by regina spektor:
"Time is all around
Except inside my clock
Everybody's waiting for their lover to unlock
Leaves become most beautiful when they're about to die
When they're about to fall from trees
When they're about to dry up"
nice job. last line is perfect.