|Reviews for Earthbound|
| sarah.evangelina chapter 4 . 7/19/2011
Ok..whos child is Gaia's? I know it's not Asmodeus and Lilith's, I don't think it's Aerons..is it Lucifer's and Ana's? XD
Aeron is actually my least favorite of the trio. He's too fake, in my opinion, I love the story ans how you and your sister write, he's just not my favorite. Like, if I didn't know his thoughts I'd love him, but he doesn't seem genuine to me, and I don't like that. Idk how to explain..like he acts one way and makes you think one thing, but he's really the other way...don't like that trait at all. But it's not like a bash to your writing skills, promice! I love anything you guys write. I just don't like him..lol.
| UnusualCircumstances chapter 4 . 3/24/2011
| Sonyashinto chapter 4 . 1/21/2011
I have really enjoyed the story so far, and i can't wait to read more.
Please update soon!
| ZeeGreat chapter 4 . 12/13/2010
Woah. Usually I get bored fairly easily with series only because I feel as if I can begin to predict the ending or the plot seems to be redundant, but with this I can't wait for the next chapter!
Also I'm not exactly clear on who the parents are of the twins, but i always was intrigued on the idea of magical twins...
And Holy crap! Ana and Lilith are 45? just wow. but I have to ask does that mean when they die while their demon halves just keep on going, because that feels a little messed up...
Anywho amazing and update pronto! Seriously its been over 4 monthes...
| mapusyaw chapter 4 . 11/10/2010
i'm one of your old readers since hellbound
i'm surprised that you still haven't updated this one. the pacing of the story seemed rather slower than the previous sagas
i hope we can see what happens to the story next.
lilith and ana are forty? wow! XD
| KiraLove chapter 2 . 10/9/2010
Oh my gosh, I'm so happy I randomly stumbled on this. I loved hellbound so much, and this is just like... extra cake. :D
| millienmile chapter 4 . 6/24/2010
awesome stories! i've read the first two and this one in less than 3 days :P points for commitment? can't wait to read the rest :D
| TymCon chapter 1 . 6/20/2010
Sparks of electricity shot through the air nearby. ", wait a sec i though Lucien got a diffrent power at the end of heavenbound? I don't want to ruin just in case someone checks the reviews.
I didn't even know this had started:O Im so happy it's began again:D Oh congrats on campella!
| readaholicxxx chapter 3 . 2/9/2010
haha reminds me of what I'm like the few times I am in the kitchen!
| Armith-Greenleaf chapter 3 . 2/7/2010
LOL! Aeron dared ask if the king of Hell could babysit Asmy's kids. GREAT MOMENT!
There was a surge in his stomach, and its cause as external. -was external.
Far too much-missing final period.
“I saw Gaia, possibly Allus too. And the grumpy Archangel’s mate was there- what’s her name?”
“Narya,” he replied without hesitation. Pryce’s description of Evan was fairly accurate. “What else?”
True, as far as normal standards go Aeron's stomach is a bottomless pit.
Aww, lovely family moment there. Aeron and his nieces and nephew... he'll make such a great father.
Lucia grabbed him by the hand at tugged at it with impatience.-and tugged at it...
Her blondehair was tied in a ponytail.-blonde space hair.
Oh my gawd that last part was so much fun. Tavara outsmarted Cale and she, of course, is insulted and irritated. Poor thing, it's a really great thing that they don't match each other at all. *grows them evil horns*
This chapter at least named everybody in the main cast of the story, right? It's gonna be fun. You have got to write faster my dear. X3
Best Wishes from Big Sis
PS. Remind me, but there's something about Lucia that you need to mention later in the story.
| Crazy.Kc chapter 2 . 1/26/2010
Hi, just wanted to say I just read your Hellbound story and now the earthbound and I love them both! Hope and update is soon, later.
| Armith-Greenleaf chapter 2 . 12/29/2009
I have a suggestion honey bun:
"The mirror was clouded from the heat inside the room- you could draw hearts on it and they’d be gone moments later." In that sentence, it'd be preferable if you changed the "you could" to something else, because this is an abrupt pov change that pulls the reader out of the imaginery to then imagine it's them doing it; in other words, fuse the idea you want to project into his pov. Same thing on the second paragraph with the "your natural body."
Westlife playing! -remembers Liseberg-
Aeron is such a girl... has he tried Herbal Essences yet and screamed YES?
His daddy Lucious! -poke-
"He walked up to his sister and touched her han, ..." Hand.
"(if you were to judge by how he looked like he wanted to squirm and leave,...)" The you. Really is distracting.
"He knew that Aeron had chosen him to babysit the twins exactly because he couldn’t fight back to save his own life." Major LOL.
"After all, to be deemed threatening by Gaia could kill you in an instant." You know it. Am I getting too annoying?
OMG! Tavara possessed Saadriel! -dies laughing-
You know... if someone tells you they're excited over reading this story, you better know they're not even half as thrilled as me. Just sayin'.
Best Wishes from Big Sis
| MarloCarlo10 chapter 2 . 12/28/2009
I love how he just found out about showering P
The twins are so intriguing! They blow my mind...
| Maria Gracia chapter 2 . 12/25/2009
Lucious is my favorite one, however, Aeron is pretty damn interesting too. I think it will be lovely to see their relationship from a, more, inside-view.
Oh, the mate. :)
Sacrael, he truly is spineless. I'm thinking this siblings are going to be truly interesting... and maybe caotic? Nice.
Where did they come from, though?
"After all, how could they make room for another person in such a symbiotic relationship?" Nice.
Okay, so he calls him brother and not father, because of the bond they shared? . ?
| Maria Gracia chapter 1 . 12/25/2009
Aeron has always been into gore. -smiles-
Why brother? Shouldn't it be father, instead?
Looking foward to reading Earthbound.