Reviews for Lucky
Self-Proclaimed King chapter 3 . 3/31/2010
I don't know how many reviews I have to do.

Ooh, you're a review hoar, aren't you?

LOL, you already have good reviews. You want one more? Fine. :3

Its cute. Did you edit this yourself?

I don't think I helped with this. xD

Cedric is so cute.

He's like a little kid.

It's quite adorable.

LOL. Cedric has a godly smile. Of crouse.

Lilian reminds me of my cousin.

Oh, yours has two L's. Oops. xD

And oh, I like tenor voices.

Ahaha, they were like, making out. No more innocent Cedric. :3

Lillian, you can totally love him.

All you gotta do is see it.

So far so good ~

I can't wait to see where this goes. :3

I like Cedric's character.

He's like this cuddly, hawt goodness all packed in one. Lovelie~

Write more !
DELETE THIS ACCOUNT NOW 323402 chapter 3 . 3/30/2010
this is perfect

ilove it :D

please update soon :D
tatertotlove chapter 3 . 3/30/2010
its great so far! aww does she really love him? cute! mabye thier gonna get married! cute! screw emma! lol. :D
MyNameIs-Madison chapter 3 . 3/29/2010
Like it and all it cheesy awesomeness.

I like it so far , can't wait for more .

Take your time .

I wish you the best with this story .

Good Job


Good Luck
autumnx chapter 2 . 2/16/2010
lol love the story! :D
keeeeeeda chapter 1 . 12/2/2009
ok, somebody should give me a round of applause

i /finally/ got around to going on the internet and reviewing stuff

and you are first on my list x)

what do i say...?

i like it, you should continue

i want to know what happens

i like cedrics name


anyway, psychopathickiller, i shall see you tomorrow

and now, i have reviewed, so GIVE ME BACK MY CHAPTER


so yeah. think about the girl you love

/so happy together/

Roxas chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
"It’s just that, he’s obsessed over so many things. He likes teddy bears, and he loves corny movies, especially the chick flicks. He cries over that stupid Romeo and Juliet movie, while I stare at him in disagreement and make fun of him."

No lie. I'd do that too.

But he sounds really cute. xD

Hey, this reminds me of.. the girl being the guy, and the guy being the girl.

You know what really made me lol?

“Dad, how can he protect me?” I pointed at Cedric who is still lying on the floor, knocked out.

I laughed so hard at that.

Because I could so imagine it in my head. It was amazing. Its just like, Cedric sprawled on the ground like BLAH, and Lilian's just like ._. Fail.

Yeah, I love this so far.

Continue this please.

Your grammar has far improved.

I might have missed some stuff here and there, but all in all, it was good. I'm sure you'll get lots of readers soon!