Loved this. :)

Especially the feel of it. All that rain and awkwardness and attraction. And then finally the "You're beautiful." It's so sweet, haha. I also liked how the two characters were anonymous, and that everything came full circle in the end (the duckling wanting to be a beautiful swan thing, the lightning, being blind from staring at something beautiful- but hey, love's blind, right?)

Again, I really liked this. A lot of people talk about kissing in the rain and dancing in the rain (guilty... haha), but I think you definitely captured the moment and transitioned it well from him seeing her and then her teaching him and finally them dancing together. Great job. I want something like this to happen to me in my life. :)

this actually was amazing. i loved your use of description, your characters were engaging and relatable, especially loved the fact that it was so impersonal, because of the use of 'he and she' instead of names, thats what helps the reader just to imagine themselves in the situation. i thought it was just simply amazing. )