Reviews for It's A Business Doing Pleasure With You
AvegaLil chapter 1 . 4/27/2021
I could read stories like this forever-sure beats the garbage that is popular in movies and books these days. If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on Novel Star, just submit your story to or
AmethystOpal chapter 1 . 5/17/2013
Wattpad is good. People can't copy and paste so it would be harder to plagarize. I hope you would put your stories on there because I really want to read them again. :)
ME chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
Just got to say, this is the BEST title I've seen in a LOOOOONG time! Good job!
72898 chapter 2 . 7/4/2012
Wow, I just finished re-reading this story a couple hours ago! I'm so glad I had the chance to finish it. Thanks for the amazing story!
AngelWings3 chapter 25 . 3/20/2012
I love this story!Hopefully you can start the sequel to this one was the first book I read by you...and I was completely blown away by how good it was written.
Brightheart chapter 24 . 1/21/2012
amazing story. i honestly had a few tears...
TheGoddessPixie chapter 23 . 12/11/2011
The only issue I have with the fudge is, you don't BAKE fudge. You cook it on the stove (or in the microwave) pour it into a pan and let it cool (I stick it in the fridge for a few hours or overnight) then cut it and put it in a large container or several small ones.

If you tried to bake fudge you'd end up with a pan of runny burned chocolate.
VTDark chapter 25 . 9/19/2011
First off, Thank you for this story! Kole and Noelle will be missed! The plot transition was good and I love Kade and Con as well ;D

I'll defo keep a lookout for the sequel... and will be checking your profile soon after I finish this review of mine. This story reminded me of my own forgotten scribble of a story that plays with the same cliche and made me want to pick it up again and hopefully finish it this time. XD

anita darling chapter 25 . 9/8/2011
I know, this is a little rude, not reviewing until the last chapter, but I just got so involved in the plot and your characters that I could not stop reading. Normally, too, I am a complete and utter grammar nazi, but I loved Noelle, Connor, Bryce, Carson, Kade and Kole. Oh, God, Kole. Please let me at him! And your take on the business-marriage cliché was just fabulous. I must admit that I found your story on A Drop of Romeo, and boy, am I grateful. Your story has been a welcome break from the monotony of my social-life-less school holidays. You're just too lovely. I wanted to thank you, also, for writing such a loveable story, and dedicating some part of your life to your readers. I write fanfiction (as well as one-shots here on FictionPress) and I find it hard to update sometimes, to get inspired, so I know how important it is to have great readers who review and update constantly. While I know I haven't been a constant reviewer and I'm starting to babble ... I'm just really glad I discovered your story, and I'm really glad that I gave it a chance (despite the grammar, which is always hard, of course).

With love. X.
Candescence chapter 24 . 6/19/2011
Cute! This story was extremely cliche and that was what I was expecting. Don't get me wrong, the story never dragged or wasn't ever annoying, but maybe, in the future, you could add some other twist in it. Make your readers tear up at parts. And then maybe you could not rush the ending so much too. But I get it. It's for Nanowrimo, or however you spell it, and you didn't really have time to look it over so much or anything. Like you said, there are grammatical errors and name mixes (esp. w/Kole and Kade). Other than that though, I like this story; you did a very good job.
sweetpea265 chapter 5 . 4/1/2011
I'm loving this story so far. Really liking the characters as well.
Jj chapter 25 . 3/9/2011
Hey! Sweet story.. It made my insides warm:-) love kole and noelle.
yumi23 chapter 20 . 3/7/2011
I noticed in this chapter that Kole's last name became Carter, instead of Harper, and Connor/Bryce's parents last name became Hildebrandt, instead of Radcliffe. I'm SUPER confused now.. . Did you really changed their last names? Because you should've put a note at the beginning of the chapter.
akaCHEEKS chapter 22 . 2/21/2011
I hope you realize that you keep messing up their last names. First Kole Harper was named Kole Carter then Mrs. Carter when it's supposed to be Mrs. Harper. That was a little confusing.
Barbie826 chapter 9 . 2/13/2011
Funny how Green Bay just beat the Steelers at the superbowl. Haha.
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