Reviews for Pyro Sapien
Nemoranth chapter 1 . 12/9/2009
Wow. My favorite part has to be the title, I love it when poets combine words like you did. The poem reads very prosaically, but the line breaks help the reader to stop and devour each line. It's choppy, but that helps the speaker sound urgent. I love the imagery of the incinerated body, and the ending was equally engaging. Fantastic!
DreamingEternal chapter 1 . 11/30/2009
wow. vivid imagery. I like how it starts out shocking with the horrifying image of a burning body, then switches to a more realistic scene that, in it's own way, is just as scary.