|Reviews for Phoenix|
| xoLOVEmeWITHnoRESTRICTIONSxo chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
You're poem seriously had me in tears.
I don't cry often, so, this is a large accomplishment.
As you can tell, I really enjoyed this poem, it was truly inspiring. i have a lot going on right now and this just kinda relived me somhow.
Very very good job.
Keep it up. :D
| Isca chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
"Am void of a heart beat and no longer breathing." I love your use of the word 'void' here - it adds such depth and life to this line.
"She destroyed herself and I am rising out of her ashes." Excellent phoenix imagery.