Reviews for Phoenix
xoLOVEmeWITHnoRESTRICTIONSxo chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
You're poem seriously had me in tears.

I don't cry often, so, this is a large accomplishment.

As you can tell, I really enjoyed this poem, it was truly inspiring. i have a lot going on right now and this just kinda relived me somhow.

Very very good job.

Keep it up. :D
Isca chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
"Am void of a heart beat and no longer breathing." I love your use of the word 'void' here - it adds such depth and life to this line.

"She destroyed herself and I am rising out of her ashes." Excellent phoenix imagery.