Reviews for Stop
bookppl93 chapter 1 . 5/30/2012
I.. I don't know what to say. This is a.. Beautiful? No no.. Wonderful? NOO. Excellent? Ergh what's the word? BRILLIANT! That's the word! Hee Hee I feel like I can relate to this.. What do I know!
The Autumn Queen chapter 1 . 5/18/2012
I like...apart from your ending. The rhythm in each line. The almost desperate tone by the time we get to the please, but I, for some reason, red a "just stop" at the end before realising it wasn't there. The please seems a little overly sudden though, particularly with a fullstop. If it was a dash, I could understand it, but a fullstop...makes it seem like there's at least one line following. Apart from that, good job.
GoneAway-MightNotBeReturning chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
Poetry is your forte, I think.

You're able to say a lot and convey strong emotions in just several words.

I don't really know what to say about this poem, because there's something about it that's so utterly painful and heartbroken about it that makes it, you know, *work.*

Daphne
uniquely-unique chapter 1 . 4/16/2011
The anger.

The pain.

The pleading.

I loved the whole thing.

Every single bit.

uniquely-unique