|Reviews for Butterflies In My Stomach|
| Softly as you go chapter 1 . 4/25/2010
When you use the word "Infest" it brings a disease to mind, very effective. The last couplet is beautiful.
| Peachesandcream15 chapter 1 . 12/3/2009
This is so poignant, and the line, "It's damaging to fall in love," is brilliant.
| Nevergiveup x chapter 1 . 12/1/2009
This is really good. I take it that this happened to you? Me too. But i found someone else. I'm happy. Don't ever give up hope on love. You just haven't found the right person yet. But yeah, beautiful poem, i love it! x