Reviews for Golden |
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![]() ![]() CHECK YOUR SPELLING AND GRAMMAR. This story has potential, but you're killing it because the flow is gone when you have to figure out which word you actually meant to use. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a really good story. I wonder what is up with everything happening. I hope you can continue again soon! I can't wait to find out what happens next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story seems really cool! can't wait for the next chapter:D |