|Reviews for Child, You Are Mistaken|
| Nemoranth chapter 1 . 12/9/2009
I'm feeling a connection between the speaker and the one being criticized. Your (my) pen... It seems like a spiteful alternate personality that seems disgusted with the other half's youthful disposition. Not as many images in this one, but it's full of poignant thoughts.
| Equivalent.Exchange chapter 1 . 12/2/2009
This is my favorite piece of writing I have seen in a long time here. There is so much behind it to make me think. I liked the way you spaced it out, made the reading so much better. Keep it up!