Reviews for Bones
Little girl Big world chapter 19 . 2/22/2012
What a unique comparison. I liked this. Sorry you feel this way, great writing though
Little girl Big world chapter 18 . 2/22/2012
"your kiss and your bite are the same."

amazing.

love the last sentence as well.

descriptions were incredible.

great work!
Little girl Big world chapter 17 . 9/23/2010
Oh I do love this. I love poetry that relate to seasons & autumn is always a favorite.

"leaves turn color and then die, finding their tomb on the sidewalk."
Little girl Big world chapter 16 . 6/30/2010
"content to remain here, with you, dangling above." I quite like this line but couldn't tell you why.

"back a ghost with all of my monsters tangled

about me to follow you 'round" I like the image this puts in my mind. This was an interesting piece, unique and I love the wording.
Little girl Big world chapter 15 . 6/30/2010
I love how simply stated this all is while holding so much depth at the same time. Lovely.
drink me pretty chapter 16 . 6/18/2010
have i mentioned that i love your metaphors?

honestly, i wish my mind could think of some

of the comparisons your mind has. they're so

accurate, in an abstract way.

"even if i were to die today

i would come back a ghost with all my

monsters tangled about me to follow you 'round"

that's my favorite part. god, just, wow.
drink me pretty chapter 15 . 6/14/2010
I've missed reading your words.

They are always so beautiful.
Little girl Big world chapter 14 . 4/18/2010
I like this comparison between reality and dreams. Very nice :)
Little girl Big world chapter 13 . 4/12/2010
"i figure i swept myself away in a lie, a scarf in the winter gust." love this.

"for now it is winter, and the snow is frigid. though it is beautiful when it falls." what a wonderful but sad tone to end this piece on.

beautifully written.

favorite.
young and the reckless chapter 11 . 3/17/2010
this poem is breathtaking! absoluely gorgeous.

if i could favorite a second time, i would.
young and the reckless chapter 7 . 3/17/2010
i think i should probably just favorite now,

because it keeps getting better and better :)

"i am a ruined sky" - beautiful!
young and the reckless chapter 6 . 3/17/2010
i really like the way you write.

simple. easy to relate to. honest.
young and the reckless chapter 2 . 3/17/2010
i like the rushed feel i got when i read this.

likes it's all just jargon coming straight from your mind.

meaningless, but important.
for shame chapter 12 . 2/6/2010
i love this one.

captures gluttony perfectly.
for shame chapter 13 . 2/6/2010
hello.

i haven't read your work in a while.

it's nice to be back, though.

i love winter.
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